I am a student at Papakura High School, Auckland, NZ.
Hi Renee, I really like your argument about water safety. Most of your points rely on common sense. Next time you could separate each point into its own slide and add more information.
Thank you so much for your comment and yes I shall do that next time when I post a argument slide
Hi Renee, I really like your argument about water safety. Most of your points rely on common sense. Next time you could separate each point into its own slide and add more information.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comment and yes I shall do that next time when I post a argument slide
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