I am a student at Papakura High School, Auckland, NZ.
Hi Renee,I really liked the way you used PowToon for your Recount. You must've done a lot of gardening during the holidays. Maybe next time you can proof read your spellings and punctuation. Overall, Great work!
Hi Trinity Thank You so much for your comment and suggestions and I will try to do what you said
Hi Renee,I really like your animation your pictures it looks great next time for your recount you should make it longer .
Hello Kshema, Thank you so much for your opinion and suggestions and ill try to make sure next time to make it longer.
Hi Renee,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you used PowToon for your Recount. You must've done a lot of gardening during the holidays. Maybe next time you can proof read your spellings and punctuation. Overall, Great work!
Hi Trinity Thank You so much for your comment and suggestions and I will try to do what you said
DeleteHi Renee,
ReplyDeleteI really like your animation your pictures it looks
great next time for your recount you should
make it longer .
Hello Kshema, Thank you so much for your opinion and suggestions and ill try to make sure next time to make it longer.
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